Saturday, 11 March 2017

OUGD503 - Collaborative - Critique

We met before a critique with other responsive groups to discuss how we would present our work and what questions we would ask. These notes can be seen below:






















Feedback: Simon noted that it is important that we are specific with the target audience. Crit members first suggested older people however we came to the conclusion that there may be misconceptions as many older people appreciate tattoos.

We noted our thoughts on focussing on a specific sector within the workplace such as the financial district as they are more likely to care about tattoos. Another suggestion was to look at the services. Simon also said we should talk to people with extensive tattoos already such as tutor Simon Jones and talk about his experience with getting employed. One last thing that was said was that we should use 'Identity' as the focus as there was chance that we could move away from our original idea. 

This critique has helped us progress with some aspects of the project. We can start to look into the design of our tattoos, what they will say and how they will be shown during the photoshoot.

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